Chapter 8 was glorious and raw. I loved how many aspects you addressed regarding this fantasy and how the reality is not sexy and doesn't bring desirable results. You dug right in and told the truth as you know it. It many ways this is the book to let people know what not to do. It's really speaking to the thought of who will you be? It's a good question which must be answered by each of us. You definitely answered what one should not be.
Your chapter on love was very evenly presented allowing all possible outcomes to be good outcomes and insuring the reader understood there are personal choices here.
The myth and reality portion was just plain fun. I love the humility you put into this. It's going to allow so many people to feel they have enough space to be all of who they are. It's really wonderful.
Great choices on the short chapters, they needed to be there but not overdone. They were complete and provided good possibilities. The placement of your switching chapter was super smart. Get the core ideas in there marinating and finish with the possibilities that aren't the usual form. I also thought your closing was well done.
Thank you for sending me this book. I had a great time reading it and I feel it's well considered and tells it like it is. It's one I'm going to recommend.